Wednesday, November 4, 2009

Copy Edit The World # 2







This is a poster for Honda Hybrid and I thought that it would be better to move the apostrophe after "s" because if it's just "not your parent's hybrid", then it sounds to me as if you only have one parent. The next photo is from my MCOM 104 Mass Communications Research class and our teacher always has typos on all kinds of papers he gives us. So it should be "the effectiveness of an ad" and "can not" should be written with no space because "cannot" is the proper English spelling. The third picture is from a restaurant's menu. On the description of the Berry Bellini, it says : "a dash of Chambord liquer" and it should be LIQUOR. Then the Braveheart says "scotch with a dash of bitters and sweet" it should be "bitter and sweet". And the last one is the Orange Dreamsicle where "as the name suggest" should have an "s" because the same suggests that it makes dreams come true.

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